Sea creatures

Here is the story I wrote on the second day of the UCL summer school.

Collin the shark, with his old friend, Harold the prehistoric sea creature, went to see the other sea animal's so that they could all become friends.
The first creatures they saw was a pair of crabs arguing, so Collin went up to them.
"What is the matter?" He asked.
"Hermin won't come out of his shell, he wants music." But Collin did not know where to find music, then Harold remembered that he has seen a conch shell along the way.
"Let's go"
So Collin, Harold, and Sebastian the extroverted crab went to get the shell when they got back they had a party.

UCAS Personal Statements

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